Sunday, July 24, 2011

Haiku Monday: SWEAT


Heat blazes, brow pricks.
Ineffectual swipe. Ow!
Sunscreen burn blinds eyes.

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Buzz was the winner of last week's Haiku Monday, so he got to choose this week's theme. Whaddya bet half the haikus are about sex. Or yard work. To go see, drop by his place and compete if you wanna.

6 comments:

Buzz Kill said...

Yardwork IS sex...or as close as I'm going to getto it. I feel the heat from your haiku. Ineffectual swipe is right. I sometimes feel like a cow whose tail keeps swatting flies, but never gets rid of them.

moi said...

Buzz: I've been trying to come up with a joke involving a rake and a hoe, but gave up :o)

K9 said...

grrherhahahaha to both of youse. thats jersey speak, for Buzz.

Boxer said...

I think Buzz has heat stroke.

Great Haiku, as usual.

xoxo

fishy said...

I love this photograph!
Perfect profile shot.
Perfect shot of human purpose.
Perfect shot of an individual in many.
Perfect shot of sweat.
Perfectly dscriptive haiku.
Pretty darn good Monday.


@ Boxer,
Than man needs to get hosed.

Buzz Kill said...

The much anticipated and never duplicated Haiku Review is up over at the Buzzkill. Thanks for playing.

Why did the rake get mad at the shovel?

Because it called his girlfriend a hoe!