Thursday, July 1, 2010

Visual Haiku: Patriotism


Thumb sucked and breast bound
does it feel good on your knees?
Pass the pitchfork, please.

12 comments:

Pam said...

I'm not sure I get the whole reference, but sure sound like hell on earth!

Karl said...

I get it, well done!

Boxer said...

Awesome and the picture just makes it perfect.

Buzz Kill said...

We're all going to hell and resistance truely is futile.

moi said...

Pam: The ultimate act of patriotism is the fight against tyranny.

Buzz: So either we party like it's 1999 or buy more ammo.

fishy said...

Great,
Now it's to be American Stepford,
in place of,
American Gothic?

I will not yield!

chickory said...

and you even worked in a rhyme! well done, and RIGHT ON

Heff said...

That Haiku SCARED ME !

Anonymous said...

the slave planet --heh.

Mayhap it is a leeetle too close fer comfort, too reality based.

WOLVERINES!!

I'se goin' ter take sombody down wif' me iffin' I has nuthin' left but fingernails.

fishy said...

So I called a friend who informs a "borg" is a cyber equivalent of a Stepford wife, also no resistance allowed. I will resist!

moi said...

Fishy: Oooooo, I like "American Stepford." Mind if I borrow it?

Chickory: Not sure if rhyming is kosher in haiku but since Master Basho is MIA, well, heck, I'm a loose cannon.

Heff: And it's nowhere even near Halloween.

Aunty: And remember: never underestimate the power of a good pair of shoes to club and stab.

Fishy: Exactly.

Milk River Madman said...

Moi,
I left you a follow up to your comment regarding Sloan. Great haiku. Happy 4th!!