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Tongue sucked numb, blood rushed,
tummy tied in candied knots.
Sweet thing’s overdosed.
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Last week's winner, Curmudgeon, is hosting this week's post-Christmas Haiku Monday with the theme of SWEET. Apropos for the season, don't you think. Or is that just me?
Tongue sucked numb, blood rushed,
tummy tied in candied knots.
Sweet thing’s overdosed.
* * *
Last week's winner, Curmudgeon, is hosting this week's post-Christmas Haiku Monday with the theme of SWEET. Apropos for the season, don't you think. Or is that just me?
7 comments:
Good haiku. I have the Jello Biafra version of that song on my Troll-Pod.
Troll: I love Jello! His aura frowns and never smiles. But I don't think I've heard his version. This could be a first . . .
Groan....looks like a diabetic coma in the making!
Good Haiku!
that was an interesting movie. Looked good anyway. But i felt my thighs blow up just looking at this haiku! a short compendium of sugar overdose symptoms. well done!
Aunty: A diabetic and every other kind of coma!
Chickory: I wonder how aristocratic women in those days stayed slim? It couldn't have all been corsets.
Half of em' had consumption, the other half had worms.
Aunty: I'd laugh like crazy at that if it weren't probably true :o).
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