both are excellent. and funny. and true. well done, MOI
does this stuff just roll of your brain? I love them, but especially the second one.Happy Haiku Monday.
Looks like toi... er I mean you and Princess have been visited by Botticelli's spirit!Beautiful haiku's. I like the little sarcasm in the first one: BEHAVE! (or die!)HugsJon
Sacred and Profane. Classic. Very nice haiku with a message.Have you read "Small Gods" yet?
K9: Thank you!Boxer: More like "leaks out." :o)Deep Blue: Or suffer! Or get warts! Or, whatever. I don't like it when the message of love is punishing.Troll: Not yet. It's loaded, but I'm still slogging through the last Girl With Tattoo book. Have to finish that first.
Great stuff, Moi. Just the use of "Botticelli" makes everything sound better, as per:Got to hurry on back to my hotel roomWhere I’ve got me a date with Botticelli’s nieceShe promised that she’d be right there with meWhen I paint my masterpiece
Love them both, and can't choose between them because the pair is perfect! Happy Haiku Monday!
Oooh, my conscience just shivered. And then I giggled. Awesome.
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